Ariana didn’t look up from polishing her compass. “Van knows the waste. He’ll walk back by nightfall.”
“Took you long enough,” he rasped.
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He always did.
Ariana kicked a stone. “The X is wrong.” Ariana didn’t look up from polishing her compass
Ariana didn’t look up from polishing her compass. “Van knows the waste. He’ll walk back by nightfall.”
“Took you long enough,” he rasped.
How does this tone land for you? If you had a specific or background in mind for her—like a historical drama or a modern thriller—I can pivot the draft to match!
He always did.
Ariana kicked a stone. “The X is wrong.”